Story: It All Came Crashing Down...

[Longstaff]

Originally Posted by want0nmee

is the 2nd gal penny?

Then Ben will choose to fuck Penny instead of Selina?

[Hardaway1818]

Author's Note:

It's really tough to write a story. So whoever is reading and like the story, pls drop a note to show your support. That way, at least I know there are people out there who are appreciating the story. It kind of gives me that little extra motivation to continue writing. Thanks!

[jibaieater]

Thanks for the story bro! Really enjoy reading it

[leong26]

Originally Posted by Hardaway1818

Author's Note:

It's really tough to write a story. So whoever is reading and like the story, pls drop a note to show your support. That way, at least I know there are people out there who are appreciating the story. It kind of gives me that little extra motivation to continue writing. Thanks!

Unbelievable glad I'm not too late for this .
Fantastic storyline and you plot the story very very well , can't wait what's the sequence of events will be popping up next , you let us enjoy Selina and penny for now , will up you after I reload , keep the writing coming

[emptypocks]

Originally Posted by Hardaway1818

Author's Note:

It's really tough to write a story. So whoever is reading and like the story, pls drop a note to show your support. That way, at least I know there are people out there who are appreciating the story. It kind of gives me that little extra motivation to continue writing. Thanks!

Thanks very much for the incredible story that is keeping me off my toes. Really hope to continue reading your work. Much appreciated!

[takashi31400]

Bro,

Has been your big fan for many many years.
Everyday will check your updated b4 turn in for the night.
Really appreciated for your great effort.
Looking forward for your update.

Originally Posted by Hardaway1818

Author's Note:

It's really tough to write a story. So whoever is reading and like the story, pls drop a note to show your support. That way, at least I know there are people out there who are appreciating the story. It kind of gives me that little extra motivation to continue writing. Thanks!

[CibLover]

Appreciates your writings very much.

Please continue..

[SerflySGR]

Originally Posted by SerflySGR

Your writing is not good, Bro Hardaway1818... It's great!

To write down actions in words is not so easy; sometimes I sit behind staring at the monitor for hours, just to come up with the more suitable phrase so I really admire you for your effort. It's not easy but you do it anyway. On behalf of the silent readers who log in every other day to read your postings, I want to say a big THANK YOU!

Recently got zapped for my postings; I wonder if it struck too close to home for some reader or maybe because he's jealous he never got a chance to get in on some action. Got some nasty comments to boot! Heh heh.

I only started reading (stopped at the Chloe and Penny part) so forgive me if I am not up to date; I read that Ben is a bankrupt does not get called up to court for any offenses under the Employment of Foreign Manpower Act

Anyway, this stage is yours - Thank you for the music! Oops! I meant nice writing

Originally Posted by Hardaway1818

Author's Note:

It's really tough to write a story. So whoever is reading and like the story, pls drop a note to show your support. That way, at least I know there are people out there who are appreciating the story. It kind of gives me that little extra motivation to continue writing. Thanks!

SHOW OF SUPPORT / MOTIVATION HERE!

As per my earlier post above, Bro Hardaway1818:

You are a great writer Bro Hardaway1818 and I know it's tough to write a story - some people will scold you, some people will zap you, some people will criticize you, etc.

But then there are the many other who are die-hard Hardaway fans who will support him be it Golden State Warriors, Miami Heat, Dallas Mavericks, Denver Nuggets or Indiana Pacers.

We will always support you!

[whatdoido]

Supporting this story

[lymain]

Very nice, waiting for more update.

[mangoosteen]

Love your story bro, can't wait for the next update!

[footstepping]

Awesome story, hoping to read more.

[Ryathtus]

This is an exciting story with the different POV and details.
Thanks bro for your efforts

[otamay]

Fantastic writeup.

Camping here for more juicy updates please.

[plok]

Support bro for your effort! Nice story that’s keeping me hard.