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Wow. Couldn't put down my phone till I finished the story. Lovely story!
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waiting for your Part 2 , please continue with your story, nice writeup..
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Would love to read part 2 too
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Tks to TS for nice story. Hope have part 2.
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Awesome story TS. Waiting for next part.
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Very nice story, thanks TS for great effort.
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We need a sequel, this is a great story op
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Great story. And not the usual happy ending. Thanks.
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Awesome story. Very special ending. Thx.
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This is easily one of the best stories in this forum that I have read.
To the author, I have a few suggestions for part two if you are writing it but lack of ideas. My proposal is that it will evolve around the protagonist getting slowly transformed into a b@stard like his boss in part One. This new direction is very intriguing for many readers already got bored of good protagonist and wanted new twists. A dark protagonist might not necessarily have a bad ending. You could go for the harem route. Fortunately there are many erotic stories online that has dark protagonist that you could use as references. I think the latest hit story "Entrapment" is one of those. This is just my own thoughts, hope you will write part two soon!!! |
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Hi bro pussluver, it’s been sometime since we last heard from you. How’s things been going? Looking forward to new stories from you. I may not be commenting much, but I’m definitely following your stories. Cheers!
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Absolute stunning story! Wish bro pussluver come out with a new story
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Huhhhhh.... This is too sad
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Excellent story, thanks TS!!
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